Can you pass this headline test?


November, 2023


Below, you'll find a list of headlines, all of which were actually used.


Some were written by ad agency copywriters (fans of the clever headline). Some were written by me.


If you're a regular reader of The Levison Letter, you can guess who wrote what. (HINT: Look for benefits in my headlines, not cyphers.)

 

Take a look and see which headlines you think are more likely to be motivating moneymakers.

 

1. You miss 100% of the wings you didn't order


2. Real sustainability answers before it's asked


3. Base wars. It gives new meaning to slug fest.


4. What can bagpipes teach us about raising capital?


5. The retirement sonata

 

6. What to do when you've outgrown QuickBooks -

   A practical guide for growing businesses


7. Over 35,000 doctors slash transcription costs

  with Dictaphone speech recognition. Here's how . . .

 

8. The 8 biggest mistakes investors make, 

   and how to avoid them

 

9. Five proven ways to avoid malpractice lawsuits

 

10. 12 ways to make social media make money for yo

 

That's right. Numbers 1-5 were meaningless headlines. Numbers 6-10 were written by me.

 

Does my benefit-oriented approach to copywriting make sense to you? Then give me a call and have me write your next web page, email, sales letters or just about anything else. 


Why do the heavy lifting when I can put thirty-five-plus years of copywriting experience to work for you -- and at an extremely affordable price?

 

   Come on. It's time. Let's go to work!


P.S. Here are the kind of results I get for my clients

 

 
(415) 461-0672
ivan@levison.com
Levison.com

If you need help with the copywriting of a sales letter, email, Web copy, you name it, give me a call at (415) 461-0672 or shoot me an email at ivan@levison.com. I'd be happy to quote you a price on the spot. A reasonable price. Give me a call and let's talk.

 

Ivan Levison. Direct Mail, Email & Advertising Copywriting
14 Los Cerros Drive, Greenbrae, CA 94904
Phone (415) 461-0672
E-mail: ivan@levison.com

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